Friday, August 6, 2021

Alma

 



This my Alma writing it was pretty easy,I have learnt to write catchy word in learning but no catchy words are in here.




1 comment:

  1. Hi Shay,

    How are you? I hope all is well in your bubble at home?

    Wasn't Alma am interesting idea to get children to think about writting?

    I think you did a great job describing the video for others, I like how you used the term "it was a bit sketchy" ...sketchy is a very good describing word, so a really good adjective. What other adjectives could you of included in your writing?

    I am looking forward to seeing some ofnyour online learning while we are learning from home so keep your blog updated so we can see what you are up to. Keep up the great work Shay, you should be proud of your awesome writting here 🏆👍😎

    Tracey - TA

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